A poem dedicated to a person, no friend of me that means alot to me. She has given me alot of support and has helped me lately. Thank you my dear friend.


Poem from a thankful mind

In middle of the city centrum,

you walk down the boardwalk,

cars passing by,

sound of sirens in the background,

the wind blowing your hair backwards,


So cold it is,

your ears are numb by the cold air,

shivers running through your every move,

looking forward to the end of this day,

or at least hoping it will end soon,


Waiting for the bus,

late for the first time,

on the worst day,

loosing all hope,

just so tired,


Coming home later that day,

read your messages on a site,

a site where you have published poems,

in hope of getting understood,


You login and see a message,

from Zoya Zaidi,

it contains words that lifts you up,

your day lights up,

you valse over to the bed,


The next morning you think,

think about the day that is to come,

not the same as before,

not the same sigh as before,

now a smile arrives,

the words Zoya Zaidi wrote to you came to mind



Poetry by Alexander
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Written on 2006-01-19 at 20:57

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Veld Cooper
Enjoyed this a lot! Thanks and keep writing!
2006-01-20


cory Crook
what it is to be in a state of mind which u have described and u are so right my friend when u project your thoughts into works of art on paper or on here in writing it gives u so much more to see when u write dreadfully and people feel ur pain and hardship, im hoping that u can find a way to become happier and look forward to the day, im in the same struggle, hard hard times life has to hold in your future and what is it to fret this, a lost life i dont know its something im having a hard time figuring out. right on write.
2006-01-20


Celtic boy
Friends give us a lot without asking in return. This poem sums up the real meaning of the word "friend".
A good poem that carries the message really well.
2006-01-19


Zoya Zaidi
Awwwww! Alex! What can I say?
I am sitting here in front of the screen,
Screen, I cannot see, words swimming away
Your words so kind, yet my heart is heavy,
With emotion of kind, to express, I'm not savvy,
That I could touch your heart, I am happy!
Yet with sorrow my heart is heavy,
For you, dear friend, who finds it difficult to carry,
The burden of existance, that could've been merry,
Your soul is troubled your eyes are teary,
At the end of the day you are really weary!
And you thank me, for making that burden easy to carry???

(((((Hugs daer Alex))))
You are very kind, really!
May God bless you!!!
AND EASE YOUR SOUL!!!
THANKS!!!
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-01-19