playing with words and a bit of philosophy under the influence of Chardonnay

Chardonnay Equations

sometimes, some times are something more
than some things.
other times, times are less than something else.
but anytime,
any time is shared doing something
with someone
some time is spent doing
all things perfectly.

Poetry by Kathy Lockhart
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Written on 2008-12-01 at 21:29

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Thomas Perdue The PoetBay support member heart!
so, are you saying you were drunk when you wrote this? well, i may not know much about such things, but this definitely doesn't sound like the ravings of a drunk to me!

i like your use of language here: "sometimes, some times", and such as this. i thought it was very original and creative. nice work. :-)


Excellently written my dear. I love it just as I love you.
Your friend,

lol giz a glass of what you are drinking Kath! Great expression, in full technicolour....yes, something are worth doing perfectly, when the moment presents itself in such fine style....loved it. Smiling at you, On the grolsch....TAi lol

Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Kathy...have another drink...if this is what you can
produce when drinking...keep drinking...

And since it works for you, I think I'll give it a try

xxx Stan

it'll be great time

Ryker-Lei Glasgow
Stunning, applauded and bookmarked, very well done.