Guardian Angel


Last night

I sent an angel

to watch over you


but he came back

and I asked why ?

he said:


we don`t watch

over other angels !





Words by Northlight
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star mini Editors' choice
Written on 2008-12-18 at 10:42

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Purple Phoenix
Ohhh that is so beautiful! Gives so much more to the term short and sweet doesn't it? :-)

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2009-01-16



This made me smile and is full of sweetness and well worthy of Editors Choice. Well done in every respect, you are a fine friend and that angel isn't wrong. smiling more, Tai

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2009-01-13


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Helga...absolutely delightful, as I find most of your poems are...

Keep writing...you have a wonderful talent

xxx Stan

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2009-01-07


Kshiti Dubey
Its short and beautiful.
I'd give this a full rating.
Hats off :-)

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2008-12-23


normalil
Wow! Editor's choice. Well done and well deserved for your heavenly sentiment!
2008-12-21


Editorial Team The PoetBay support member heart!
This text has been chosen to be featured on the front page of PoetBay. Thank you for posting it on our poetry website.
2008-12-20


normalil
Lovely compliment for someone...I hope they appreciate it.
2008-12-18


salem
deep text
i liked it

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2008-12-18