She did try - really hard! But.........


Challenge Rhyme Royal WHY?



I sat alone full of despair and thought
Why do I feel this way so sad and blue?
I know not what I've done to make him so
Full to the brim of wonder just for you
Admitting now I know not what to do
I tried my best to make him love me so
I made his favourite dishes even though

He ate them without thought like he is blind
I made his bed so cosy and inviting
Bent over backwards to be good and kind
And even when my toes he was a-biting
I never saw the love in his eyes lighting
I stroked his hair and underneath his chin
He just ignored me, oh it is a sin

What can I do to make him love me now
I've done all that I can I'm at a loss
I keep on trying, must succeed somehow
But show him I don't want to be the boss
Just look at him he doesn't care a toss
For me you bought that dog and yet it's true
He isn't mine for he belongs to you!

©Pamela.M.Brooke




Poetry by Pamel Brooke
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Written on 2009-01-03 at 14:08

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Dan Cederholm
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Hehehe this whas a clever one
the last stanzas hits hard!!!

*APPLAUD*

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2009-01-04


melanie sue
quite an amusing tale of love gone wrong...i especially loved the last two verses......although there is more than one dog in this story.
2009-01-04


Rob Graber
Amusing and well crafted!
2009-01-03