an acrostic


Valuable Memories

Mirrors of the past
Echoes of then
Memorials that last
Of when things began
Reminders of where
Inspiration comes from
Encouraging
Successes of all you've done




Poetry by Phyllis J. Rhodes
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Written on 2009-01-08 at 19:45

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Kathy Lockhart
This is a really nice acrostic. I have been reading daddy's book about our family history and his words brought many memories and lots of smiles to my face. It is so good to read these things that happened before my memories even began. Congratulations on the the front page feature. : ) kathy
2009-01-11


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2009-01-10


John Lambremont, Sr.
Nice flow to this one, and sentiments well-expressed. Nice write, Phyllis, and thank you!
2009-01-09



I am going to comment from reading the last line right up to the title. I really got a buzz out of reading it backwards as a mirror image is reversed. This is really captivating, just like a mirror of thought, successes reflect you, who you are, very encouraging reflection, choice of words are thrilling to see in the images of your creativity, very inspiring and triggering reflection, like a beginning of the past, future, present. Awesome talent expressed here.
2009-01-08