To Daisies

Frost covered the silent forest
bleak hints on the snow
the fox left a trace - shyly

The morning skies of December
shades kept floating above -
where were those western winds?

Listen to the bell, keep sense
shadows of spring and summer
frozen and tilted - in marble

Feathers of heaven embraced the wood
eyes, hypnotized and remote -
once a way to daisies

Fade away the ground below
when it ends and goes off
beyond the seven seas - apart...

(29.09.2008)







Poetry by Amaryllis
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Written on 2009-03-23 at 12:08

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Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
...is set (out) through...

Apologies.
2011-03-05


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
A lovely arrangement of sensation and mood is set our through your words. The fourth stanza in particular is excellent.

Thank You for sharing.

Language: 5
Format: 4
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2011-03-05