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kath66 years old from Sweden
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unvisible
if I had only known
love would cut me
making days hurt
light unvisible
as the light house
turns into darkness
so I row on familiar seas
a scream away
from open wounds
clinging to a moment
untouchable
Poetry By kath
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Written 2007-02-21 09:28
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fantastic choice of words. this poem leaves tastes sounds and colour. Very interesting. Very painful.
2009-10-27
NotaDeadPoet
oxymorons add to the imagery of blind lighthouse and clinging to that which is "untouchable" and sensory images a scream away from open wounds--ouch!
2007-02-21
F.i.in.e Moods 
so much aching in these words, stings a heart... i can feel the disappointment and the yearning for the love to not have taken a turn towards the end... my interpretation... an emotive write... thanks for sharing :f xx
2007-02-21
lastromantichero
Katherine this is beautiful please cling to the beautiful moments of your love this poem is so evocative of a yearning rgds mike
2007-02-21
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