Strings died to you

we were attached invisible
like memories from the past
closing in during lonely nights
cold water freezing

i tried to grab that feeling
and now i'm hanging here
dangerously near a burst
on a single string


froozen




Poetry by Fredric
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Written on 2009-12-05 at 13:21

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Joan Black
Rich, emotional language!!!

Language: 5
Format: 5
Mood: 4
Overall: 5
2010-07-08



Great read. It is terrible, isn't it? when you entangled as you describe...all I can say is, I am sure there must be a reason for it.

Teaches us something, if only, how to hold on.

Smiling at you

Tai

Language: 5
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2009-12-05