What would you do if you could change things in the past?

Time Angled

let me adjust
only one tiny thing
when time turns
out of time

let me see myself
from different angles
and stop the time

when tomorrow

everything changes

Poetry by Fredric
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Written on 2009-12-06 at 19:41

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Joan Black
Very nice poem, good imagery, GREAT!!!

Language: 5
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 4