Hello forever, and how are you today?

This is new, I'll never be here again
You, my dear, have set me free.
Once again I can feel
The rain on my face, the spray of the sea.

Forever isn't long enough
For me to spend with you
I'll count your footsteps as you leave
As I slowly break in two.

Ill be with you forever
I don't care where
Because where no-one else was looking
You found me there.

Poetry by gemma
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Written on 2009-03-26 at 22:59

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Rob Graber
Effective use of rhyme and meter; I like especially lines 2 and 4 of the final stanza, subtly separated by longer, less regular lines. Nice write!

this is a lovely love song. and happy too.