I was sitting in the dining room, watching football; I felt as if a peice of me was missing. I searched inside myself, and found this.




Restrictions and desires of a teenager

 

Arising deep within me,
A desperate passion;
to be washed away with the sweetest smell of your perfume.
Anew desperate desire;
Unlike that of which I have ever felt before;
Takes up its place in my soul;
As you stand by my side.

I go on a journey;
Travelling in a candy-lined ship,
Riding on a tidal wave of passion and desire,
Then so near to the point four old mountains stand before us,
and below them the shore of responsibility.

Regretfully turning back;
My heart beating sadly,
Like the deepest metronome,
I wait for the time to pass,
For the mountains looming shadow to pass,
And the shore of responsibility,
To sink underneath the white foam,
Of my sea.

 

When the time comes;
I can fire up,
In the late night;
 Of my bright white.





Poetry by Ryker-Lei Glasgow
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Written on 2008-11-30 at 18:46

Tags Teenage  Desire  Hormones 

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Jonathan William Hill
wow that actually made me horny
2009-12-14


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
WOW!!!!!

The second last stanza
is....Amazing.

I really like this

~L.~
2009-06-26


Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
Excellent write! You are a natural. Looking forward to reading your wonderful poems 20 years from now...imagine...
luvestix
2009-05-25


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
such a talent needs to be free and allowed to flow abundantly;it's no wonder you had to leave the football for this wonder of poetic expression you have now created. Creativity fills up the holes in our lives. : ) kathy
2009-02-10


Eva
beautiful. i loved that;

Regretfully turning back;
My heart beating sadly,
Like the deepest metronome,
I wait for the time to pass,
For the mountains looming shadow to pass,
And the shore of responsibility,
To sink underneath the white foam,
Of my sea.
2009-02-09


Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
Bookmarked and bravo!
2008-12-09


gemma
beautiful.
2008-12-05


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Ryker...If this what you find when searching inside yourself,
WOW!!! Keep searching...and find some more...this is a beautiful poem..

Stan
2008-12-03


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Ryker...If this what you find when searching inside yourself,
WOW!!! Keep searching...and find some more...this is a beautiful poem..

Stan
2008-12-03



Amazing work young man! Yes, you are a fine asset to this place of extraordinay poetic sweet souls....loved every word, especially the final lines....Yes! we all have to take the strain of our responsibilities, that is what makes us grown up, but those who wait, will transcend the mountains wherever they may stand in our paths....smiling at you, Tai
2008-12-01



Splendid read.
A couple of things you might revisit in terms of punctuation and possessives (subject-verb agreements), but that is more an issue for writing convention and aesthetics.
No drama in getting across with expressing that missing piece.
Bravo! Applauded and bookmarked.
2008-12-01