Can't explain this one more then the poem do. i had no inspiration to write this. just wrote down words.


Uncontrollable

Back after days break,

needed time to breathe,

almost suffocated,

weren't able to communicate properly,

lost in something i can't explain,

troubled by things from every angle,


Recently lost someone,

a classmate,

went to school with her for 3 years,

why the innocent silent one?

the kind and good hearted one?

so unpredictable,


Banged in the head by reality,

we are more mortal then we think,

life can be taken fast,

and in a cruel way,

faced with how harsh life can be,

like hitting a brick wall,


Uncontrollable




Poetry by Alexander
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Written on 2006-01-30 at 21:59

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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
love 'we are more mortal then we think'
i am sorry for your classmate but thankyou for the honesty in this.
liz
2006-01-31