Amanda K
sweetly written. full of armoas.
2006-12-18

seda
it is a great poem !

regards,
Seda
2006-12-14

F.i.in.e Moods
this makes me want to burst out in tears! such is the effect of your words here... here i see a person living the past moments of a love they used to have, and how it's left them feeling that their love is gone... so impactful is the impression on my mind... your imagery drives so deeply the emotions being conveyed... all of the stanzas hit, but the last one... ouch! it's a swift kick in the pain sensors of a heart... i really like the way you've written this, it's very beautiful poetry... :) *hug* xx
2006-11-04

Peter
this is nĂ­ce!! a relly good flow and what a beautiful image it shows...

keep it up =D
2006-02-01

penfold18
I really like this one Rik,it flows so well,so many good lines in there,well done :-))
2006-02-01

Morpheus
I love the flow you give this. The last verse is my favorite, becaue of the finality of that last tear drop...
2006-02-01

liz munro
love 'a cavern of pain unyielding to time'
I agree with GB nice flow.
liz.
2006-02-01

GB
Hi ! ... Well done Rik .... Very nice flow of words . Good ! .......... Glen ( GB )
2006-02-01