Just a little poem I wrote a while ago, its not really that good I don't think, but I guess you people are the judges of that.
^_^ hope you guys like it!



Enchant

A curse is only a curse if viewed so,
a blessing is the same way.

the strongest is challenged by all,
and the soulless will beat him someday.

they capture the love of his life,
and surely he will say:

"you've beaten me, but don't
make me leave her in this way!"

souls return in the strongest of feelings
and strength is broken too,
it doesn't matter what the enchant,
it'll be broken too.




Poetry by Andy
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Written on 2006-02-01 at 19:13

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Very good poem Andy. I like it a lot. Can you guess who I am?
2006-02-25


PoeticProcrastination
Beautiful, Andy. I love this write. ::::} Welcome to the bay!!
2006-02-01


Mary
wow, i feel really inferior now
2006-02-01