No doubt there are thousands of things like this, but I wrote this one so gr.


This Sword

This sword I carry is a burden
Its weight heavy in my heart

Though I hope to use it well
I know I'm not that smart

This sword is a test from myself
it is a way for me to see

Wether or not
I can control
the Power I vest in me.




Poetry by Andy
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Written on 2006-07-23 at 22:57

Tags Sword  Power  Responsibility 

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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Very deep.

The 3rd stanza i love.

Liz.
2007-11-15


Nora
I love the metaphor.. it's great!! Deffinately makes it easy to understand..
2006-07-28