Never you and never me

I must stop
dreaming



about You

I will stop wishing for you to
spend
three hours in the rain with me

Not imagine how my hand
drawing stars in your palm
would be

Breathe and realise

It is so easy to see
that we
could never ever be

(I don't like cricket and you don't love me
obvious to see)




Poetry by CC
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Written on 2009-05-21 at 23:31

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Sanaz Danaipoor
Oh so beautifully written and yet so simple, che choice of words are splendid, thanx for sharing :)
2011-03-17


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
I know this feeling all too well. Accepting the obvious realities, as this poem suggests, is sad but can also be very liberating. I loved this poem and the emotion coming form it, in particular the most touching lines:

Not imagine how my hand
drawing stars in your palm
would be

Thank You.
2009-05-22



Awww this is such a sweet and yet sad expression of your romantic soul.

Tai, wondering how you know for sure?
2009-05-21