still in L.A. but leaving tomorrow afternoon. What a trip! Thanks C. P. for the lovely, inspiring, elating, sating adventure!

California Dreamin'

L. A. confidential

Mexican residential

Margarita dances

Freeway 405 chances

Eclectic cultural traditions

Vencie Beach contradictions

Malibu Beach surfers

Santa Monica Pier singers

Canyons with majestic views

Beverly Hills' Avenues

Hollywood stars and homeless

Handprints and signatures, famous

Medical marijuana

Tatooes and music from Tiajuana

Valleys, hills, and cacti

Sand, water --  you and I

Holidays and vacations

People from every nation

California dreamin'

L. A. tourists schemin'

Norms, Coco's, and El Pollo Loco

Eatin' our way through as we go

Coming home a little fatter

Satisfied in gaining what we were after.

Poetry by Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-06-16 at 04:43

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I have never been any farther west than western Texas. It sounds as if you enjoyed your trip. I heard that you were out that direction, but I don't remember who told me; it could even have been you for all I remember. Great write my friend.

Phyllis J. Rhodes
It was fun reading this. In my imagination I was hopping all around those places with you. Written like a merry-go-round of adulating adjectives, what a great ride!

I really love the feeling of this text, Kathy!
And, I'm so glad you could do this trip!

Hi Kathy!

Sounds almost like you been to some kind of heaven ;o)

Sounds like you had a wonderful holiday, thanks for sharing it with us. Much enjoyed.

Aurora Borealis
It sounds like a wonderful vacation! Very well written!

liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
A lovely pic
to go with
a beautiful write


Happy that you enjoyed the adventure; and of the inspiration it gave you to express this clever and wonderful piece of writing. Thanks. :)