I dunno. I like the words. I like the rhythm.

Suicide I

Beneath the tidal waves I lie
Plunge into the sea did I
Bound to this rock
In the water I die.

Poetry by Daniel
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Written on 2006-02-08 at 07:57

Tags Suicide  Waves 

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I am thoroughly enjoying your poetry Danny but why the sad theme over and over? Just letting you know that your existance was never an accident....believe me!!!!!!!!! All the same, I have to admit the piece was excellent.