My first attempt at Haiku...also a double acrostic! Constructive feedback welcome :)


Hearts break, recover
Endlessly searching with want
Awareness, love is

Haiku by Bella738
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Written on 2009-09-13 at 07:09

Tags Haiku  Hearts  Love 

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ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Hope with in the mind , can stop the hart from breaking apart.
Ken D

France England
Well done as I was left feeling two for tea warm and cozy. Oh what a wonderful expression in so few words. Your first attempt? May I say it is great.

ahh,,soulsearch is a wonderous adventure,what emerges from the deepest corners of one the heart has many valves that open and close with every beat we take for granted and that is love! sometimes I wonder about feeling and emotion and go what the...? nicely written!!