minimalistic metaphor


Quasars and Black Holes

Some
Souls
are
like quasars-
others,
black
holes.





Poetry by melanie sue
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Written on 2009-11-10 at 18:16

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Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Melanie Sue...you get your point across well in a short but
succinct write

xxx Stan
2009-11-28


chuma okafor
you are elaborate and your poetry is deep! cheers...
2009-11-27


Chris Fernie
Dearest Mel,

Is this what they call a uni-verse?


Starstruck Chris
2009-11-13



Cool metaphor, Melanie - and so to the point..
2009-11-11


NicholasG
Yep...some are radiant...others suck.
:-) Nick
2009-11-10


Phyllis J. Rhodes
Oh yes!! I know both!
Brilliant observation!
2009-11-10