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a spy-


the field is such pretty warm colors
lavenders, oranges, dusky yellows -
the perfect limelight to spill out my secrets
and everything i can't speak out.
i pour it out like a syrupy maple from a tree's bittersweet bark.
i'll make my a marmalade with my thoughts, spread it on baked bread.
come to think of it it's kind of bittersweet.
when you spill out one thought the rest follow.
i wasn't too sure how much you'd been listening.




Poetry by Pixie
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Written on 2009-12-04 at 06:17

Tags Magical  Realism 

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Amy Valentina
Hi,
After a long time I got to feel the warmth that emanated from the painting-like poem and the beautiful nature...
It comes alive...
Keep it up.. Looking forward to reading more from you.

LOL,
Amy
2009-12-04



I laughed at the title, but it suits, down to your under covers!lol

You are very welcome, I look forward to reading more of you.

Smiling at you

tai
2009-12-04


Pixie
thank you both!
2009-12-04


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
This is sweet. I'm with Liz; welcome.
2009-12-04


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
WELCOME TO THE BAY :-D

Very clever imagery in
these wonderful lines

~L.~
2009-12-04

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