In memory of my father's death, September 30, 2003.Maybe it's just my own morbidity, but lately dad's been in my thoughts heavily-memories of his last days will always haunt me. Poetry helps vent these emotions still strirring inside.


More Than A Thumb Squeeze

The bare bones of ambition

bloomed briefly

before withering into

a vase of aphasia.

Our gazes locked in the last moment

of recognition revealed in a thumb squeeze

as he latched on before he was gone.

Oh, how your daughter still waters

your crumbled dry stem,

composting the leaves

with her

grieving green thumb

gone numb.





Poetry by melanie sue
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Written on 2009-12-06 at 21:00

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Bob Simpson
Beautiful poem....so sorry for your loss
2009-12-07


shells
This really beautiful and stirred a lot of emotion, it tells of the emptiness of grief.
2009-12-07


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
I am deeply moved by this.
2009-12-06