Pretty self explanitory.


As They Dance

They danced
Hand in hand upon a plane
Cardinal to some
Others thought it a shame

But they danced

Entwined in each others song
With the undertones of "everlong"
Keeping their rhythm afloat and about
Admist the seas of careless doubt

They rhyme and they sing and they praise
All of what the heavens have made
They know others see it too
But they dance together
For it is what they should do

And they smile

Over and over again
Hand in hand
Becoming the most intimate of friends

And they laugh
Knowing they will be there
To comfort one another
When one heart feels despair

It makes them laugh
It makes the smile
They do that together
In a fashionable style

And always, always...they do it with a smile



Poetry by That guy
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Written on 2006-02-24 at 02:02

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PrincessPebbles
So sweet! Written so beautifuly!
2006-11-08


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
you have a great flow to your words
and I really like your poetry.

Liz.
2006-03-01


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
Like Zoya, this reminds me of something of mine - that is said not to detract from the value of your lovely poem, rather, perhaps, leading to the question as to whether or not there really is a 'global muse' that places ideas into the minds of poets, artists, and inventors?

But your's is singularly special.
2006-02-24


penfold18
Well done good content and thought in this.
2006-02-24


Zoya Zaidi
Yeah,
Sometimes a dance shared by two
Is not just a dance,
But an expression of something deeper Than what meets the glance,
Something shared and revered by the two,
Something evident to the on lookers few,
Something that is slowly devaloping too,
As the dance progresses, between the two!
Something that is infinitely sweet though,
Something, that in a way, is mysterious too!

(((((((hugs that guy for a wonderful write))))))))

By the way, it reminds me of my"Enchantment of the First Kiss";check it out if you like...

love, xxx, Zoya
2006-02-24


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
This is good. Good flow that weaves the sentiment of romance well. Particularly like this stanza.

"Entwined in each others song
With the undertones of "everlong"
Keeping their rhythm afloat and about
Admist the seas of careless doubt"

Good stuff and welcome to the bay.
2006-02-24


PoeticProcrastination
You seem to jump from format to format, and from rhyme scheme to rhyme scheme, but this does not take away from the poem as a whole. I love this one! Bravo!
2006-02-24