Raw passion


Electrocuted by M.A.Meddings

The very thrill of you
Is like an electric current
Surging through my limbs
It begins imperceptibly
In the pit of the stomach
Then spreads in vibrant surges
To my toes

Then just as the tingling curse
Subsides you turn and smile
And it begins again
The quivering tightening
Of flesh sensitised by the
Thought of you
and I burn

Until the thrill returns once more
And I feel the blood rush
Become majestic
Your nearness enticing
A burgeoning pride
Become a man a latent lover
And we unite

Two hearts as one two beings
moving in vibrant waves of desire
softly yielding to the joy we share
naked in our wonder
As we give welcome to our love
thrilled by each surge we become
electrocuted





Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Read 607 times
Written on 2006-02-25 at 10:18

Tags Electrocuted 

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text


John Ashleigh
A peircing sound, feeling and sight come to desirable measures.

The poem is an oxymoron in itself, fantastic!
2006-02-28


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
Good flow, good stlye and good imagery as always, yet this one doesn't quite hit me with that tobasco sauce effect i normally get when reading your stuff. Teach yuh for setting your self such a high standard. Still an enjoyable read so 4 on the tobasco scale.
2006-02-26


penfold18
Well I think its shocking,in its current form, but reading between the lines I'd say you are well and truely zapped michael,great write .
2006-02-25



A concentrate of passion! A text which propagates itself within the reader like a mighty heartbeat wave.
2006-02-25