It's just a view...

in more sense than one.


All the passion all the pain
in a final breath slips away

No more cold
No more hunger
No more judgement

If only they knew

No more indifference
No more fear
No more help

from the caring few

I am sorry that I have to lay here
as my final breath slips away
but you can remove me now

Truly...

I really never intended to spoil - your view.





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Written on 2010-05-11 at 08:32

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John Ashleigh
This poetry flows lovely. Just rolls of the tongue. A pleasure to read.

Regards,
John.
2010-11-26


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2010-05-23


NicholasG
Tabernac!!!!! I had this guy sitting in front of me at the hockey game last night, chucking beer and popcorn on everyone until he passed out, spoiling everyone of us sports fan's view. I tell ya...some people !! Geesus!! @$#$#!%.
Huh?? Oh. Oops....well... never mind! ;-)
2010-05-11