This is for my best friend,Olivia.I know she comes to the bay once in a while and she is like the music to my soul.It may not sound much but I wrote it from the core of my soul........she is my sweetness.


Sweetness.

Sweetness is when I do what I straight repent,
When I retire deep to concort my evil affairs,
When I know I am riding on life's wrong wave,
And you judge me not.

Sweetness is when I talk before I think,
When every smile is as real as every tear,
When I know there's a soul I can trust,
This is my sweetness.

Sweetness is when I know that look in her eyes,
When our hearts heve simple telepathy,
When no words need be spoken,
Yet a multitude is said:SWEETNESS.

Untainted by time and distance,
Sweetness in black braids.
Engraved in a golden heart-unforgettable.
Sweetness in our journeys,our growing up.

Honey was just a touch-
She is the complete thing
Sweetness in the quiet transparent soul,
This is my sweetness.All mine.



Poetry by she
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Written on 2006-03-01 at 07:32

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Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
A wonderful way to honor a friendship. Written with accomplished flare. An enjoyable read.
2006-03-02


Zoya Zaidi
Your friend is sweet like honey dew,
Don't let go off her, such are few,
In this big and bad & wide world,
It is hard to find such a friend!

((((((HUGS sHE YOU WRITE VERY WELL. t This is a very tender and loving piece!!!
I just lovit!!!!!

Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-03-01


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful.
So lucky to have a friend like this
it is a very rare thing these days.
Liz.
2006-03-01