The Agony you Portray

My radiate eyes of illuminate beaming emerald.
Dimming, becoming blunt as you cry for help

You own the ambition to drive me to snap
A pure mortal twig I am

You cry, you crawl

My intensity of my compassion

I'm withered, and frail
Dim, and doubted

The agony you portray
Will drown me

Poetry by Tidy Mess
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Written on 2010-08-31 at 08:32

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I must get a new keyboard, this one does not spell right :-)

I love this, such emotion. You have way with words that is exceptional, keep writting, i will ad you as a friend, if that is OK.

Be blessed

Zoey xX
I like this one.
It shows the emotion of the poem perfectly.

PS. [Hi, best friend. ^^]