lost

im lost in an unknown world,
no one to help me,
i cannot see,
my feelings,to the wall are gelled,
locked up,
maybe i might have some luck,
and escape this distant land,
but no,im lost in an unknown world,
sitting here in the sand,
maybe here i may be stuck,
but i have never felt more at home



Poetry by UnforgivenAngel
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Written on 2006-03-04 at 11:11

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John Ashleigh
Aww darl'n.

An unknown feeling - like when you was a baby. You didn't know WHO you were - but you feel alive in yourself. I think this poem just represents that your lonliness has a place to live inside you - and that it has increased over the years - so that you're nion comfortable with it.

Good write, made my mind work xxx
2006-03-04