Long time since my last text. I'm sorry, but so much has happened so I couldn't find words. My sea is my last one, and I hope it wouldn't be long till next time:) With Love Tina


My sea

I held me head up high
Never show the world my other face
And my hidden soul

I knew, you always knew
That the boat doesn't stay long in my shore
I feel bad when I hope
But I didn't want you to sail from me

The day has come
No waves on the ocean
No tears will come from my eyes
I will forever keep my pride

A calm wind plays with my face
I see you sail in the sunset
A mist conceals my eyes
Until my sea ones again sees the dawn




Poetry by Tina
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Written on 2006-03-06 at 12:09

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Raven Alarco
I think this is an amazing text Tina. It's so sore and painful to read.
2006-05-30


Zoya Zaidi
The imagery is absolutely charming the metaphor of the sea is very well thought of, and taken to its logical end, dear Tina.
You have come back with a renewed skill and your talent has been honed with time...
You have not lost your touch, on the contrary enhanced it many times.
Bravo!
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-03-17


GB
Hi ! .. I thought this piece was good . Thought the words flowed beautifully with much thought and love . Hope from this I don't have too wait too long for your next one . Cheers .... Glen ( GB )
2006-03-06