Hear me now


A whirl with a twist, a dance
to the ever coming formation of matter
and at times I don't care.
Night is a cavernous mistress
where all I am
streams to the music of her.

Drowned in worldly say so
I sleep in dark hollows
and move when the sky
tells me too.

Hear me now, I am leaving.




Poetry by Bob
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Written on 2010-12-08 at 00:05

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Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi Bob...this is so good, I won't dare to attempt a comment

Stan
2010-12-28


Mr painter
Great
2010-12-15


shells
Just beautiful wording, especially "I sleep in dark hollows and move when the sky tells me to."
2010-12-08


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2010-12-08


Kathy Lockhart
"Night is a cavernous mistress
where all I am
streams to the music of her."

I am in love with this concept and the beauty of your words. These words are like a ride to the infinite. Lovely.
2010-12-08


John Ashleigh
Vivid imagery, and outstanding use of language. Just a brilliant poem all in all. Thanks for writing..

Regards,
John.
2010-12-08