Just Like A Diamond

My heart captures your light

just like a diamond

and in a moment

the air start to glisten

as my true colours

reflects in your eyes.

Poetry by Elise
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Written on 2011-01-02 at 16:36

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Maria Christina
Had to stop sobbing before I could write this. This poem is how I was with the Love of my Life, who died 22 years ago. This reminds me that I need to remember our joy, not the tragedy of losing him. Thank you, Elise!

Language: 2
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5

Mr painter

Nancy Sikora
A beautiful poem about the chemistry of love.

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Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5

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In this nis a prism of thought! Very enjoyable!

Kathy Lockhart
very beautiful. your decriptive language flows like a quiet stream brilliant in it's reflection of your image.