The puzzlepath


his left shoe is pointing it's way out
as if to show me the path
i'm spiritlessly astonished
by the kingdom of paradise
which fits so perfectly in his iris




Poetry by sweetest sin
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Written on 2006-03-13 at 00:00

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Dan Cederholm
Suggestive is the red line here . . .
and the target is the Kingdom
in his iris. A good text
"The puzzlepath"
2006-03-13


Loke
I like this creative and suggestive use of words. Very good!
2006-03-13


Eron Olivier Braden
once again....sweet...
2006-03-13