Mohave Comfort Fire

The stars once more have lost their race
Through night-sky versus mercurial moon.
In this defeat no dishonor will debase
Futile efforts to intersect upon the lune.

Desert scents of juniper and Mormon Tea
Waft fragrant above the comfort fire smoke.
Banana yucca roasting at my knee,
Fleshy fruit consumption for us hungry folk.

Nevada nights nip raw this time of year;
Our lot is cast by glowing embers,
Whose reflector stones essential to survival,
Stave off cold that we need not fear
Frostbite to peripheral members,
Till sunlight returns with warmth's revival.





Poetry by Brian Oarr
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Written on 2011-06-03 at 22:22

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countryfog
Very evocative sonnet, and the descriptive details - smells of Mormon tea, banana yucca, campfire smoke - let the reader experience this as you did, with all the senses. Nicely done.
2011-06-04