Inspired by my unfinished short story "Lain". - 10th October 2012.

The walk.

The morning perched through twilight.
I was running into a motionless dream of light mists -
shrouded with pale amber roses.
The ghost of yesterday faint in the mind.


The morning grew to a mild afternoon,
although it was autumn,
it still echoed the chirp of sincerity.
Orange and red leaves lay above their young.


At the tips of the trees the moon bounded
and slaughtered the night sky.
The ink around her pupils
shone like sapphire in the prancing rain.

Poetry by John Ashleigh
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Written on 2012-10-10 at 14:52

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I'm with Elle on this one, I felt a sense of peace, ethereal, enjoyed the serenity.

Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Hey did you get all that writing talent ?
Enjoyed reading your poem

xxx Stan

josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
"shrouded with pale amber roses" a powerfully descriptive phrase. Welcome back, John.


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
I really liked this, it gave me a kind of peace, thank you

Elle x