the poem is attributed to the inspiration given by Jon Hanovers challenge 5th Stanza. Slight additions to achieve a flow .


Without You Near


Without You Near

There is but a steady beating,
Of my heart whenever you are near
Just a twitching muscle to tend
The moment, until you turn and smile
For Here then my love
Here is the rhythm repeating,
Throbbing incessantly as you
Surreptitiously and without caring
Rob me of my senses steal them away
Until they are jangled tortuous feelings
And my heart can rest no more
Without you near




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Written on 2006-04-04 at 18:17

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BlueyedSoul
i love the intensity and build up of emotion in this write....very passion filled and yet tender all at once.

lovely

blueyedsoul
2006-04-06


Lourdes
a lucky woman indeed
... another good work , amigo mio.
2006-04-05


she
I couldnt agree more....who is that lucky woman:-)...????Very well expressed!!!!!
2006-04-05


Jon Hanover
They are free lines for you to do as you want and need to write. Looks really good so far. This is really good so far, good quality out there.
2006-04-04