Following The Plows

Two plows, one beside and behind the other,

Are clearing the one road in and out of town,

Embanked in dirty mounds on either side

Of the dark pavement raised here and there

With ice where the plow blades jumped over

A swollen seam, the patches of salt-glint like

Seaslide on moonlit sand, and every half-mile

Or so the settled snow of a long lane leading

Off between white fields, the steep slant of

A barn where always one light leans above

The loft door, almost hidden in eave-shadow.

Wind-sifted snow, blue arc of one winter star.

 





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2013-02-23 at 15:27

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shells
How you can put your observations into words, I feel the dark, see the white and a beautiful final line.
2013-02-24



I love the way the poem starts out with 'Two plows, one beside and the other...' with no mention of the human beings driving them. It gives them a kind of personification.

As always, you make us see things in a new light--both literally and figuratively.

William
2013-02-24


Ivan R
Beautiful poetry
2013-02-24