Commentally Ill
a beautiful toeku you have written here. an entrance to the daily trance for the unfamiliar reader.

the repetitive first and third lines (words juggled) make me think that either you are a master of language, or running short of words. perhaps you'd like to borrow my dictionary so you can ruin it?

either way, the effect is good. especially when the reader is drunk.
2013-04-15

Powerful and effective. Sadly, I understand this one all too well.
2013-04-14