Blue May

Anvil tuned Saturn
Canyons yawn swallowing worlds
Deep blue dismay



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Written on 2013-05-14 at 22:19

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I actually feel bad for Saturn in this one! Really well done. I love the imagery.
2013-05-16


Commentally Ill
wait. blue may or blue dismay? ah, it is a may of dismay, this i can understand.

*tries not to cry*

*fails miserably*

gotcha! i do not cry, for that i would need to have a soul. :p

:)
2013-05-15