P r a y e r

Ephemeral dawn lightly touches violet meadows
A whisper of promise, lifts ghostly chains of sleep
Deeply drowned in seas of evening r i s e again
To embrace a mystery eternal as prayer...



Poetry by Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2013-07-09 at 13:58

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An elegant little piece, my friend :>)
I like the subtle hues here, the dawn upon violet and the whitish grey that 'ghostly chains' brings to mind. The s p a c i n g is effective too, bestowing a subtle alteration in tempo. Applause!
2013-07-09