Lonely Girl

Weeping into the night.
Down she goes into the pools of blood.
Brave she tries to be when all she sees
is the droplets of red
Tears form within her eyes as it becomes
deeper with each slice she makes
Today will be one and then no more to follow
Tomorrow will be two to replace the one
She sits and watches as one more drop falls
and splashes wide.
She thought she could slice once across the heart
to give that pain to last.
She knew all along the last cut was her last
Her body became limp and the blood was all around
Down into the gates of hell she goes
Her spirit burns and her soul dies
She left a note and it read
Mom and Dad I am sorry I left you with tears of sorrows
I am also sorry I had to go please I pray don't hate for my
death I have given myself
I know I can't go to heaven because I have sinned upon Gods
words of life
Tell my brother He can have everything I own.
Tell my sister she can have my boyfriend she always wanted.
For you mom and dad I left my heart and my tears on your pillow
of shame.
All I can say in this note I am sorry to all I have hurt.
Love you all from your daughter of sin.




Poetry by wbluerose02
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Written on 2006-04-11 at 03:37

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Dave Glavin
I know I have traveled to places in myself that the emptiness was so dark,cold and alone that my heart froze.Everyday of life was a battle to hold off death.I'm now 39 and still telling the reaper to kiss my ass.Remorse and loss have eaten me away and that's why I put it into my poetry or drawings.By turning my darkest emotions out,it helps clean the soul.Keep expressing yourself in your powerful poetry and always believe your not alone.Take care.
peace,dave
2006-04-19


Zoya Zaidi
Very moving!
But I do hope it is not happening to you?
You seems far more sensible to me to go for such a thing!
So, whoever it is tell her to stop entertaing such notions, as you yourself are aware that taking a life is sin, your own, or any body else's. Besides it is a precious gift, given to you but once to live, so don't squander it away like that.
Please read my poem; "Life is a precious gift", before going in for such a thing. It might, just might, show you the light at the end of the proverbial tunnel?
((((((Hugs for some hope to live))))))
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-04-11