StillHoppin
This is incredibly well-written. I especially like the line "when innocence was ripe."
2014-03-03

Like it!
2013-12-20

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2013-11-10

Chaucer Whethers
The Time Trade?

A lot to reflect on in reading these lines.
2013-11-10

Elle
it is like looking back at old photos and they all seem to have this light and a sense of surreal as if this is just stuck in pages of an album, poignant, the last two lines, for me, say a lot

Elle x
2013-11-09

As someone who appreciates both sunny and rainy days (both figuratively and literally), I can relate to this.
2013-11-09

countryfog
There are times when time itself pauses in its rushing by, so much happening that it has to stop and let it all unfold. You've captured that moment perfectly.
2013-11-09

I like this, in particular the notion that there is one perfect moment when everything is in balance.
2013-11-09

A poignant piece, shells, as I read it. I like the delicate descriptions and the thought-provoking last few lines. Applause!
2013-11-08