Falling Near Bye

Once in time flashing bye
Ride the ticking hands where they go
Saw lightning in her eye
As we were passing said, "hello"

"Oh you" said she, "Pause a moment please."
For with breath held dear, frozen in place
Beauty of light shining through her face
Appeared as though very Life's release.

The Moon and Stars did seem to peer
Into the veils that she did wear,
My heart shall never again beat the same
Time flashing bye, in the rain falling near....




Poetry by Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2014-04-22 at 11:29

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An intriguing meeting indeed! I like the sequence this produces in my mind, the mysterious lady emerging from the rain as a shining vision. The rhyme scheme is interesting too. Applause!
2014-04-22