Katmai



Caldera simmers
Memories murmuring 'you'
Dissolved by a breath 




Haiku by Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2014-05-11 at 10:54

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We at BBP high coo this haiku, appropriately for the location our friend recalls. We like the 'm' sounds very much, and also their sudden disappearance for the last line's 'dissolved'. Applause!
2014-05-12



I was taken by the beauty of these few words too.
Katmai is a volcano in Alaska so the well chosen words make it magical or even metaphorical.
2014-05-11


Nabeela Altaf
Great word put together. But I didn't understand the title.
2014-05-11