Caldera simmers
Memories murmuring 'you'
Dissolved by a breath 

Haiku by Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2014-05-11 at 10:54

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We at BBP high coo this haiku, appropriately for the location our friend recalls. We like the 'm' sounds very much, and also their sudden disappearance for the last line's 'dissolved'. Applause!

I was taken by the beauty of these few words too.
Katmai is a volcano in Alaska so the well chosen words make it magical or even metaphorical.

Nabeela Altaf
Great word put together. But I didn't understand the title.