'L'acrobate

through a telescope
tripping on a tightrope faraway
galaxy of dreams starring
the acrobat
dancing patterns to
the rhythms of moments
rhyming, for you may see me
fall,
through a telescope
faraway.



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Written on 2014-05-24 at 20:26

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
Why is there a semi-colon between 't' and 'e' ? it shouldn't be there :)
2014-05-24


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
if you want your title to be French : ''L'acrobate'' is what you want :)

Loved this... especially lines 5 and 6! so good, I felt like you grabbed my imagination and made it dance with the moment... hard to explain, but you got it going.
2014-05-24