Antitheseus

Who writes the story
Of those who never make it
Through the labyrinth

No Ariadne to hand out
A piece of string
The lifeline to freedom

Those tales untold
Of wrong turns
And dead ends

Deep ruts worn
By frantic feet
To no way out




Poetry by Åsa Andersson
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Written on 2014-07-27 at 07:19

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Who writes the story
Of those who never make it
Through the labyrinth



now i think i got the message
people who get lost, nobody can find them again
so they and their stories are lost
but only them can write their stories
2014-07-29



Who writes the story
Of those who never make it
Through the labyrinth

i like the intro
indeed who writes their stories?
2014-07-27



A wonderful write.I will read again:)
2014-07-27



The poem reaches deep into the heart of the reader. The search for an impossible freedom and the pain that it causes. The poem is well organized and flows like honey. Well done.
2014-07-27


Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
Fine poem Asa. Modern myths lived in
the everyday human tragedy.
2014-07-27