Three little words

Three little words
Why are they so hard to say?
Because, just because

I know it will make you happy to hear them
I'm not sure if I'm ready to say them yet
Still

Your entire goal was just to hear these
THREE
LITTLE
WORDS

Are you unsuccessful because I do not say them?
No
You know that.

Your mission succeeded.
I guess I'm proud of you
but still I hesitate with these words

Finally
a deep breathe
I let the words out
You. Broke. Me.




Poetry by Marie
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Written on 2006-04-23 at 05:35

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amandeep
a soul wrenching poem.

Bookmarked
2007-07-14


ebanieluver
wow if anyone can connect with this poem it's me....
2006-12-11


Will
Devilishly Clever...
2006-08-02


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
this is BRILLENT!!!!!

love the ending.

liz
2006-08-02


ebanieluver
this is the freakin great poem that has ever been written, I may just have to put it on my site one time, if that's ok with you of course, love ya!
2006-07-17


Amanda K
What is so smart about your poem is how you ended it unexpectedly with such strength. That wut i was trying 2 say Marie and if u misunderstood me. I am sorry again.
2006-07-15


Amanda K
wut's so smart about it. i didn expect these 3 words. a good shot.

love,
2006-07-14


Troll
(((((((((((((applause))))))))))))

and a heartfelt smile, not because these words make me smile, but because you look like you need it ;)

this is so very sad... and right to the very end, you lead the reader into thinking that you're fixing to say i love you, which makes the end quite a zinger. well done.
2006-04-23


Jon Hanover
Great poem, you get everyone to follow you then you stop them dead in their tracks great write.
2006-04-23