Beautiful words as the sparks still fly, but burn quickly on the icy floor. I am not quoting, of course, your words reach into the hearts of all who have memories.
~Ashe
2019-12-10

Bibek
Short and sweet. :)
2016-05-18

Amim Akhter
One could burnt it all up...but what to do of those ashes..brautifully written my friend
2014-11-03

BM Barde
_One day callously
As she works pass me._
Drunked love this line, ure genius about her disregading. Nicely penned.
2014-09-15

F.i.in.e Moods
Lack of recognition for your existence and how much the strength of feelings for her would not be taken into account by her... poignant in a seizing way for me, where one side bleeds and the other shuns without any sort of reasons to do so... I like the choice of words, and the brevity... creates an impact that can't go unnoticed for the reader, in my opinion... beautifully written.
2014-09-15

hmmm ... haunting little poem. I like it! Very nice flow and vivid imagery.
2014-09-14