I know it shifts suddenly but these days my mindset is doing that alot...


Blind

Strung along for so long
A marionette following a deadly song
For fun you twisted me this way and that
You'd laugh when I'd try and simply fall flat
On my face, blood down my lips, the taste of regret
The taste of neglect
The sign of my stupidity
Used and abused, you left me confused
Then stood and laughed at me, bemused
Yet I still failed to see it all
I failed to understand what it all meant
In the end, all to my own detrement

In a room now surrounded by four walls
And no door
Trapped within this space I hear noises outside
Sobbing, weeping wailing cries
A sombre shuffle of footsteps
Methodical, lifeless, emotionless
A collective creak as everyone sits
A muffled voice speaks in a monotone
An organ plays and there is shuffling again
Moments later the room spins
The floor below thuds
A gentle pitter patter on the roof and then
Nothing, no one, silence




Poetry by Hasani
Read 922 times
Written on 2006-04-25 at 02:51

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text


moon smile
Nothing in life is harde as being a victim by the only heart we gave iyt everything love,sacrifice and true emotions.Your poem has this bitter taste of manipulation of emptions ,and your last two lines end the scene perfectly.
2007-11-10


Amanda Manmohan
Hasani! Another brilliant poem from you, of course. You used exactly the right words to make me feel how you felt as you wrote this poem. The way you shifted between the two stanzas also seems to show just how frustrated you are, and how suddenly everything has changed. You're amazing! :)
2006-04-25