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Current Music:  "Yeah" - Seether

 

NOTE:  2015 01 18  06H56 EST  Childhood Memory -




Childhood Memory

 

A little butterfly, going flower

to flower: that's the image in mind.

 

A beautiful little butterfly,

so colorful and mesmerizing.

 

Its little wings, beating to the

wind, fighting against the force.

 

Little creature, so nimble, and

graceful in its way, its beauty.

 

A sigh of contentment in my heart,

I observe its trajectory with delight.

 

A determination worth of admiration...

Little butterfly, going flower to flower.

 





Words by F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2015-01-22 at 04:01

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
This is a very nice, little poem. I really enjoyed it. How can you write so well with music playing?
2015-01-22



Living here in Florida, I'm fortunate enough to be able to see butterflies all year long. I never tire of watching them. Very lovely poem about a moment in time.
2015-01-22


jim The PoetBay support member heart!
As one butterfly to another, a kinship. Childhood is fleeting, and didn't we flit through it?

Lovely. Wistful.
2015-01-22


Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
For some abstract raison I infer a b&w film
scene of this vision underscored by ominous
indecipherable chaotic figures that loom
over childhoods innocence.
2015-01-22


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
This really is so beautifully and delicately written. Such a lovely childhood memory full of knowing and wonderment, expressed so warmly from the heart. A most enjoyable read. It took me right there into that special moment.
2015-01-18