Trying to kick-start the muse with an old poem.

 

for f.i.in.e moods




Peep, Peep, Peep

 

Let the peaches support the languid summer evenings,

rocking on the porch, from which he loves to piss,

while you write your stories, while together 

you watch the sunsets beyond the coastal range.

 

It’s tough to make a living, the work is harder

than he imagined, the money less.

Come winter the cash runs out, so you teach, 

and it helps. The teaching allows the orchard.

 

Three days a week you become the mother-bird

stuffing French down the fledglings’ throats:

 

La belle demoiselle qui passe là-bas! You say.

La belle demoiselle qui passe là-bas. The chicks repeat.

Là-bas! You say.

Là-bas! Say the chicks.

 

So goes the winter, so goes a year. You are terrific.

Boys stare and dream, girls wish they were you.

 

The orchard is his dream. You dream of abandoning 

the chicks, of speaking the language you love 

in the country you’ve never seen, to have the man 

in ragged jeans and the grand schemes become the man 

 

on the boulevard charming you with words, to leave 

the rented house, the rotting floor of the porch, 

the pissing, the wasps that come for the fallen fruit,

to leave it all behind, even the baroque sunsets.

 

I thought I saw you coming down the steps of St-Denis—

the beautiful young woman that passed by.

 





Poetry by jim The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2015-01-19 at 09:03

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
Ah but of course... "La belle demoiselle qui passe là-bas" ... should have guessed that... lack of sleep can do wonders ;)
2015-01-21


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
This is really nice, Jim, really nice. It reads beautifully. There's nothing forced about it. It shows that you weren't done writing poetry.
2015-01-21


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
How can one not read a post titled "peep, peep, peep" and as always such a real pleasure to read your words. A very fine story and dedicated to a very fine lady of Poetbay. I feel sure it will have brought a smile to her day.
2015-01-20


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
This is wonderful, Jim... loved it! Your words, the descriptions and their feel, always take me away... so, so good.

Still don't know what "La belle demoiselle qui pas là-bas!" means :p Made me hugely smile to see that French passage in here :)
2015-01-20



A beautiful tribute to a lovely lady, who we haven't seen anywhere enough of her lately. You've captured her perfectly.
~Ashe
2015-01-19



I'll have to sign up for your French class. I have a degree in it and still can barely speak a word.

In the meantime, I too sit and imagine myself strolling down la Boulevard Saint-Michel or having a café crème on la Rive Gauche. Your poems are not just carefully written, but also seem fresh and original. Bon travail, as usual.
2015-01-19